Clear and Compelling
I've chosen an order that works well and makes the
reader want to find out what's coming next.
- My beginning gets the
reader's attention and gives clues about what's coming
- Every detail adds a
little more to the main idea or story.
- All my details are in
the right place; everything fits like a
- I ended at a good spot
and didn't drag on too long. I left my reader with
something to think about.
Some really smooth
parts, others need work.
The order of my story/paper makes sense most of the
- I have a beginning, but
it really doesn't grab you or give you clues about what
- Sometimes it is not
clear how the details I have used connect to the main
idea or story.
- Some of my details are
in the right spot, but some should come earlier or
- I've lingered too long
in some places, and sped through others.
- I have a conclusion, it
just isn't the way I want it yet. I may have gone on too
long or just tried to sum up in a ho hum way.
Not shaped yet
The order in my paper is jumbled and confused. I'm
- There isn't really a beginning or
ending to my paper. It kind of just takes
- I'm confused about how the details
fit with the main idea.
- My ideas seem scrambled, jumbled and
disconnected. It's confusing.
- Conclusion? Oops, I